So I really like that you're creating your own setting and lore, and I appreciate that this is a continuation of the worldbuilding you did in "Protect the Child". It was a good reflection as well, evoking Deltus Judas' past as well as his hopes for the future. However, considering that the main thrust of the narrative was and is Judas' relationship with Elizabeth and Cassandra, the nature of that relationship was unclear. It seems both as though he captured them in the most recent battle, but also that he has a long-term relationship with them. I'm sure you understand exactly what's going on, but you need to make sure those details are on the page somehow if they're going to be important. I hope you'll continue exploring and expanding your setting for all of us to enjoy!