A gritty portrayal of the cold logic of war and the fact that every man in a military force like the HDF are ultimately nothing more than numbers to be moved from one column to another upon death and then immediately replaced. I do feel more could have been done with the theme of the Writing Jam besides a passing mention of reflective lights, but in all honesty, I am also happy with what was done here. To put more into the theme would have run the danger of taking away from what you were actually writing about.