I think this game has quite a lot potential and there is a lot that can be improved, however I think you have a good basis to start from with this game. The thing I currently enjoy is the music as it fits the story very nicely. Some things that you maybe could add in the future, which I think would make the game even more enjoayble are:
-combat, so you can fight back
-make it so the health bar and picking up food actually matter
-maybe add more things to interact with to emphasize the story
But overall very solid jam submission,
keep it up!