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Totally understandable, music is also something we added in last minute and now it unfortunately has some problems

I think this game has quite a lot potential and there is a lot that can be improved, however I think you have a good basis to start from with this game. The thing I currently enjoy is the music as it fits the story very nicely. Some things that you maybe could add in the future, which I think would make the game even more enjoayble are:
-combat, so you can fight back
-make it so the health bar  and picking up food actually matter
-maybe add more things to interact with to emphasize the story
But overall very solid jam submission,
keep it up!

Altough at first it seemed like a very random game, it's actually quite fun when you start playing it and I played through the whole thing. Two things to maybe consider next time:
-make the game a little less punishing, if you get hit only once at e.g. the slime, it is quite frustrating to have to do the whole fight all over again
-try polishing the game a bit more, maybe get feedback by friends or family, so people actually give your game a chance and discover how fun it can be
Overall a very solid jam submission, especially the music was very good,
keep it up!

I think your game is really fun to play and the level design is very clever. The art style fits your game very nicely and the music is good. One thing I would maybe add in the future is a volume slider as the sound is very loud and you have to manually adjust it in the volume mixer so it is playable.
But otherwise really solid submission,
keep it up!

I think your game looks and sounds great, it's a real blast of nostalgia to when I used to play a lot of these black and white games, I think you hit that aesthetic spot on. One thing I've noticed is that the player, or at least that's what it felt like for me, is a bit lost and doesn't know what to do or what goal he is trying to work towards so it's easy to loose motivation and click away. I'm not saying you should put a big text box intro in front of it, but just something subtle to hook the player, to give him a purpose.
Otherwise I think you did a great job, the game fits the theme very well and it looks fantastic,
keep it up!

I think this is a very solid jam entry, as it was quite fun to play, altough it seemed kinda unpolished it definitely had something which made it entertaining enough to let me play the whole game. The levels felt a little bit similar, especially towards the end, and maybe you coud have also added a wave counter and a range indicator for the towers, btu overall, I would say this is a pretty good jam entry, keep it up!

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Well I mean it's a cool game, but you obviously didn't create any of it during the game jam, since even the files you can download are 50+ days old. So I don't really know why you uploaded it in the first place, since it completely misses the purpose of a game jam, which is a challenge to create something in a very short period of time so yeah...

I think you did a pretty solid job with the level design, as it was manageable, but not too easy, however the game didn't load into full screen for me so I was stuck with a small window to look through, also maybe some music would've been nice. I got to the second level, where I always kept sliding off of the moving platform after the air conditioners, which was a little bit frustrating. But overall, I think this was a pretty good jam submission, especially if you're a beginner, so yeah, keep it up! :)

I think you did an amazing job with the graphics, they look really good and also the music feels very fitting. One thing to note, as some others have pointed out as well, is, that you don't die when you fall down platforms into the "void" or whatever, which feels really bad, since you're just stuck and have to end the game and completely restart. But otherwise I think you did a great job, keep it up!

I think you did a very great job at designing the player character and the see monsters who come in later, as well as the wonderful music. I enjoyed it a lot (and my sister who played it too did as well), so yeah, good job, keep it up!

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Ar first, when I started playing this, I thought, oh yet another bullet hell game, but I think you really did a great job at nailing the theme and making it entertaining to play at the same time! I got to 346000 score on my first try and I quite enjoyed it, since it was very intuitive. One thing to note maybe is that enemies sometimes spawn directly on top of you or so close that you cannot dodge them at all, which feels a bit unfair, since getting health is also very difficult, but other than that, yeah, great job!

i think you did a great job with the build up music and I liked the look of the corridor, as the graphics were very nice, one thing that was kinda annoying was the repeated baby laughter at the end and corridor repeating themselves too often without any change. But otherwise solid submission, it's hard to really nail a horror game, especially in such a short amount of time, I think you did good, keep it up!

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Did you actually make that yourself? Cuz that's like not even that bad

I think you did a very good job at making the game feel responsive and just overall nice, I also really enjoyed the music and SFX, which were very fitting. Two things you maybe could improve in the future are that the game sometimes feel a bit random, as the different bullets deal substentially different damage, so sometimes enemies are super easy and sometimes they are very harrd to deafeat, altough you can also attribute that to the theme, which you definitely hit on point! Especially during the boss battle, there was a lot going on at once, in other word: total chaos. One minor issue was, that I clipped thorugh the wall at one point and could only get back after getting shot by the enemie, i don't know how that happened. But overall, really great game, fits the theme perfectly and it sounded wonderful, keep it up!

Thank you, that is really nice to hear!

I sincerely agree! 

Thanks god, this is not our story and also your connection between characters is also your health bar, that's why, if you die, it snaps! Glad you liked the game! 

Thx, I rated yours too (:

Really interesting take on the space shooter game, I think you really nailed the visuals, as it felt extremely like the ones we are used to. One thing to improve is to maybe think more about balancing, so maybe give the enemy with more bullets less health, so that they are not as dangerous, as they are right now and the first enemy maybe poses more of a threat compared. But otherwise, you had great audio and it fit the theme very well, good job, keep it up!

Sure, I'm going to go ahead and rate yours rn, I would also really appreciate good feedback to our game, as that's what game jams are all about, after all (:  :

What happens after your death? This game shows you one way it could be. You have to help the souls relive their lives and fight against enemies. Because of the different gravity of the two souls the simple controls get quite interesting. The goal is to pass the life again and reunite the souls once more. Shoot enemies with the small flames that you collect during the game.
Enjoy this little story of a couple living their lives:
https://mogamer09.itch.io/after-death

Very interesting game, the art is just mindblowingly-amazing! One thing to improve is maybe to add an in-game tutorial, as I found myself very confused about what to do. The Audio is great and it looks like a very promising game, if you expand on what you currently have. Overall, great jam submission, keep it up!

This is our game, I would love if someone could take the time to give some feedback, as that's what really makes you better as a Developer:

What happens after your death? This game shows you one way it could be. You have to help the souls relive their lives and fight against enemies. Because of the different gravity of the two souls the simple controls get quite interesting. The goal is to pass the life again and reunite the souls once more. Shoot enemies with the small flames that you collect during the game.
Enjoy this little story of a couple living their lives:
https://mogamer09.itch.io/after-death

I just did, you did an amazing job, check out the comment for more detailed feedback!

I really enjoyed playing your game, as it was really interesting seeing the same rooms in different states with something new to explore everytime. Especially as the music intensified and it got black and white, I was really hyped up! Unfortunately though, that was already pretty much the end of the game. ): I would've loved to continue playing, so definitely add more levels in the future, if you want to improve the game. But other wise, really great jam submission, I really enjoyed playing it, keep it up! (If there was a full realease, I would definitely play it!)

Here is our game, I would love if you could check it out, if it sounds interesting to you: (:

What happens after your death? This game shows you one way it could be. You have to help the souls relive their lives and fight against enemies. Because of the different gravity of the two souls the simple controls get quite interesting. The goal is to pass the life again and reunite the souls once more. Shoot enemies with the small flames that you collect during the game.
Enjoy this little story of a couple living their lives:
https://mogamer09.itch.io/after-death

Hey, here is our jam submission, I would really appreciate, if you could give it a try!

What happens after your death? This game shows you one way it could be. You have to help the souls relive their lives and fight against enemies. Because of the different gravity of the two souls the simple controls get quite interesting. The goal is to pass the life again and reunite the souls once more. Shoot enemies with the small flames that you collect during the game. Enjoy this little story of a couple living their lives: https://mogamer09.itch.io/after-death

Hey, this is our submission to the jam, we would love if you could give it a try (: :

What happens after your death? This game shows you one way it could be. You have to help the souls relive their lives and fight against enemies. Because of the different gravity of the two souls the simple controls get quite interesting. The goal is to pass the life again and reunite the souls once more. Shoot enemies with the small flames that you collect during the game. Enjoy this little story of a couple living their lives: https://mogamer09.itch.io/after-death

Hey, this is our jam submission, I would appreciate if you could play it, as we really put a lot of work into it:

What happens after your death? This game shows you one way it could be. You have to help the souls relive their lives and fight against enemies. Because of the different gravity of the two souls the simple controls get quite interesting. The goal is to pass the life again and reunite the souls once more. Shoot enemies with the small flames that you collect during the game.
Enjoy this little story of a couple living their lives:
https://mogamer09.itch.io/after-death

Hey, this is our game, I would really appreciate, if you could take a look at it:

What happens after your death? This game shows you one way it could be. You have to help the souls relive their lives and fight against enemies. Because of the different gravity of the two souls the simple controls get quite interesting. The goal is to pass the life again and reunite the souls once more. Shoot enemies with the small flames that you collect during the game.
Enjoy this little story of a couple living their lives.

https://mogamer09.itch.io/after-death

Ps: I rated yours too!

It was a fun little experience, altough the demon really hit me out of nowhere. (: One thing to improve is to maybe add some images at some points in the story, to visualize it better. But overall nice jam submission, keep it up!

Really cool jam submission, it looks and sounds absolutely amazing. One thing to improve is to maybe make it clearer, what I can jump on, as I tried to jump on some platforms which looked fine, but I just dropped down and died. But overall nice job, keep it up!

If you have some spare time, you could maybe check out our entry, we worked really hard on it:

What happens after your death? This game shows you one way it could be. You have to help the souls relive their lives and fight against enemies. Because of the different gravity of the two souls the simple controls get quite interesting. The goal is to pass the life again and reunite the souls once more. Shoot enemies with the small flames that you collect during the game.
Enjoy this little story of a couple living their lives:
https://mogamer09.itch.io/after-death

This is our jam submission, I would love if you could try it! :

What happens after your death? This game shows you one way it could be. You have to help the souls relive their lives and fight against enemies. Because of the different gravity of the two souls the simple controls get quite interesting. The goal is to pass the life again and reunite the souls once more. Shoot enemies with the small flames that you collect during the game.
Enjoy this little story of a couple living their lives:
https://mogamer09.itch.io/after-death

Very cool game, enjoyed it a lot, although the zombies are maybe a little too fast, as I could only partly avoid them and could not come very far, although I tried multiple times. But otherwise, I really enjoyed the music and throwing out people to become faster as well as distract zombies is a very fun double-usage mechanic! So, really great jam submission, keep it up!

What happens after your death? This game shows you one way it could be. You have to help the souls relive their lives and fight against enemies. Because of the different gravity of the two souls the simple controls get quite interesting. The goal is to pass the life again and reunite the souls once more. Shoot enemies with the small flames that you collect during the game.
Enjoy this little story of a couple living their lives:
https://mogamer09.itch.io/after-death