Alright, here we go.
Let me start with one very important thing. I don't play narrative games. At all! I don't really enjoy them and I tend to skip dialogs in games a lot.
BUT:
I made it up to day 5 in your game and that has one very important reason. The text moved soooo fast.
There is nothing more annoying in a videogame than slow text. I am not sure if you wanted it this way or if it was just a time constraint but I really liked it.
It felt responsive and gave me the opportunity to skip parts that did not interest me as much.
The Menu was absolut perfect for a jam game. I doubt there are more than a handful out there that have such a polished menu.
The art and music was beautiful. everything matched perfectly and I really like the little soundbits of the car engine in between scenes.
So in conclusion:
You made me enjoy a genre that I never liked and your game feels really polished!
The only little bug I encountered was the tutorial screen overlaying the first dialog.
Very well done!