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Hi Zcyon, I really appreciate the time you take for making the review! 

Driven by your comments, I've uploaded a new version were the textures are slowed down, (In the next versions I'll try to experiment with the textures positions, to reduce the dizziness/eye strain further).

Also, I've added an option to control the camera speed, which turns out to be a Must-to-have in the game, after reading all the reviews!

Now, about the story and the theme: True, the cinematic took a lot of time to do and I should have prioritized reflecting the theme. 

The Story is certain not finished, but I'm a little confused you didn't get the main points of the story: Taras lives in a country surrounded by a war, lost his mother, and he wish he could disappear. Then he suddenly appear in another world and meet Fee, who affirms that is linked to Taras somehow and asks him to help her to recover his powers... (Sure, I'm not a writer haha). My plan was to hook the player wanting to know who's Fee, and advance/enrich the story introducing new conflicts to resolve. I'm very welcome to listen any suggestions from you!

About the voices: they are generated by a computer, so the emotions aren't quite well painted :( I've the experience making games with banjo kazooie voices, and in this game, I bet to put the full audio to give it a more cinematic feeling (paying the price of being emotionless...), In my previous experience, the jiggles tends to sound too comical, so they doesn't fit quite well in this game. If someday I've the resources to pay for actors I'll surely add a little of color to the voices! 

Oh yeah, I almost forgot to mention that I uploaded the last soundtrack, I think the new one is more accurate (but still seems a piece from another puzzle, and don't quite fit with the other soundtracks, like a MrPotato add-on haha)


Thank you so much for your review, really, I'm a little moved that you take your time to elaborate it.

 I'll love to hearing to you when the game finally reaches the end!