Can't rate this because it looks like the version I had available to play was not the version you had done when the game jam submission period was over, but I have a couple suggestions that I think would improve what I played:
- Make sure the dialogue script matches what's being said. If the character says "I am afraid" then the on-screen dialogue should read "I'm afraid", no typos, etc.

- Name the language toggle after the target language (in the target language) i.e. "Castellano" when it's in English and then "English" (or handle language selection in a separate menu).

It looks neat, but it's hard to tell how many colors were used (just black and white, or also many shades of gray?).

THE GOOD PARTS

• It’s a game that FEELS driven by the narrative. Let me elaborate on this one: many jam games attempt to create a narrative experience but often lack the elements that make for a well-presented one. I’m talking about cutscenes, pauses, time for the player to try to engage with the events of the game, some camera movements that really made the game feel “cinematic”, and the voice-over were the elements that enhanced the narrative-driven design of this game. With that said, I think most of those elements do well, which is not a minor achievement.

• A platformer that feels good enough. During my playthrough, the platforming controls felt nice, I managed to get everywhere I wanted without having to battle the controls and that’s something that I’m thankful for. There were some instances where the character felt sluggish and not on par with some of the platforms’ movement speed but that can easily be attributable to the limited time we have to develop these games so it’s all right.

• The music is great. I really enjoyed the music up until the end of my playthrough; I did feel like the last soundtrack, when you’re running away, didn’t really match the situation or the feel of the game [but this is just my subjective opinion, though].

THE BAD PARTS

• I didn’t get the story. Yeah, I just praised the narrative-driven design of the game which had elements that work well when they’re separated or mildly connected, but as a cohesive/homogeneous entity, I don’t think the premise is communicated well enough to at least grasp what’s going on. Some explosions, then you’re with Fee [which seems to be an important character because the game is named after it, but doesn’t have a lot of screen time which resulted in me having a mixed impression as to what’s going on with that character], then you have to pick an orb, and finally, the orb goes haywire which means you have to escape from something. I feel that the game had an intention but the story didn’t get to me even though I paid attention to each line of dialogue (I swear).

• Some on-screen effects were too much. And I’m not joking, the 3D elements have so many effects that try to enhance the experience but they’re so many that they end up competing for your attention and made me dizzy (no joke, I had to look away from the screen for a while, have some water, rest my eyes a bit and then come back to write this review after my playthrough). I’d recommend toning down the number of on-screen effects and using them to highlight important elements of the game like a point of interest, a collectible, power-ups, threats, etc.

• The voice-over was not OK. I think this game would have benefited from having just a single jingle for each audio line played in a loop for each character that appears on-screen (like in Undertale/Banjo Kazooie/games alike). Instead, the voice-over was kinda distracting because I was trying to figure out if they were actually recorded by humans or computer-generated because you need to have the talent [or be a computer] to communicate so little emotion when interpreting a line. I saw someone else in the comments making fun of the game’s voice lines which I think it’s not fair because the game doesn’t seem to be presented as something that’s trying to capitalize on being half-assed or badly done on purpose; instead, it’s presented as something that was trying to be great and awe-inspiring but missed the mark by a little bit.

• Ummmm… Loop? I missed the jam theme on this one, I didn’t really get where the theme interpretation is other than the character running in a loop when the scenes are loading; I think this can be attributable to lack of time to develop the idea further and present what was supposed to be the theme’s interpretation but I think the theme implementation should have been prioritized further.

CONCLUSION

I think the game is good. It has a little issue with the mouse sensitivity but that can easily be attributed to my computer. The narrative-driven design works well when it works (particularly some cutscenes make the game look like you’re in for a ride) which is something that’s not easy to do and this game managed to do in certain scenarios. Gameplay-wise, it’s a light game so you won’t have any issues getting to the end of it and enjoying the full experience; beware the eye strain, though!

I really like the atmosphere of your game (music, art, voiceover, etc.)! I had a hard time with the camera movements (it was really sensitive for my mouse, so it was a bit jerky), so I couldn't get really far. But I did enjoy the game as far as I got :)!

The transition to the sphere shape at the end of the level was really cool! I also liked the different camera angles used in different parts of the level.

Good voice-overs! Loved the game.

Very cool, music and atmosphere were also great, dialogue progression was a little but overall you did a great job man :D

You made me travel with your game. Nice atmosphere, the art and the music are really cool actually.

It's a really good work !

What I liked:

• The art style was really cool
• Player controls felt pretty solid
• The music fit with what I was seeing, it didn't feel out of place.
• You kept the game short enough to keep a player's interest (which is hard imo)
• In relation to the above, it seemed that it gave you more time to work on polish

Suggestions:

• While I liked the shifting textures on objects, I think they should either shift slower or have less detail to them. The doorway put a strain on my eyes.
• The camera acts a guide to the goal at points in the game, which isn't bad in itself, but I think it should be a button feature rather than automatic (like a hint when you can't figure out where to go.) There were points where I was trying to jump to platforms, but I was fighting the camera while trying to jump the platforms
• I liked the voice acting, but I felt like there were instances where the dialogue's implied certain emotions and it didn't sync up with the voices (mostly Fee)

Overall this is a really cool entry and congrats! Do you plan to move forward with the game?

Nice music, graphics and an interesting idea. I was surprised by the curving effect at the end. Nice game.

This game is very good in many areas, the only thing that could be improved is a tutorial haha the rest is super cool.

An original idea and incredible sound.

Nice game, interesting idea! I think that’s camera can be better.

Very interesting art style. The overlay was a bit hard for my eyes - maybe it should have been added in worldspace coordinates?

The music was amazing!

This was amazing! The curve was super cool at the end. The poor level design and voice acting actually make it even better as I couldn't stop laughing. Great job, really, I was amazed when I thought "This is a jam game" while playing it. It had a very cinematic feel too.

Edit: I almost forgot to mention that the thing with the strange texture is very cool, so shall you develop further versions - you should keep that effect.

This is a really nice game, I appreciated the different parts and the level design (I just would have same remark as Point Vertex about the first gate). An option to adjust the mouse sensitivity would have been nice also for this demo (because a little high for me) Apart from that, the voice acting and music also bring a lot, well done and it makes we want to see the full version

It had beautiful art and music. I thought the voice acting was a nice touch. With some more content and polish this could be something really amazing. Keep up the good work, I'm excited to see what it becomes!

This game is awesome and well made, if you're planning to develop it further it will make a great game! 

I think I broke it. I skipped the dialogue and it just gave me a black screen.

Hi,

this is a pretty cool demo, I like the focus on story and telling that story, this is the only game I've seen in this jam that has voice acting in it, love that! The music is also very good in my opinion, good job on that one! The movement feels smooth, and I love the details like the labyrinth having a view from above and the deathride having a cinematic view. Because you guys are planning to continue on the project, here's some feedback:

• I think the game would benefit from having some more polished models, but this is of course personal preference.
• Having to climb up the mountain to pass the first gate was not really what I expected, so maybe you could have something small indicating you could get up there (e.g. a ladder) or you could have a key (if it's in there, I didn't find it, my bad) to open the gate.
• My last tip is to just keep developing this game, because when a polished version of this project comes out, it will be fantastic!

Hope you can do something with this review and keep up the good work :)

-Remi