Thanks for the feedback!
I don't understand much about slowdown. Does it seem to slow down while preparing to jump, or is the jump speed not fast enough?
As in it broke up the momentum of the gameplay because I would have to stop & wait for my jump to charge to progress. A double jump would allow for more fluid movement through the level.
BUT: I also observed that it helped enforce the objective, because it would eat up your time and add urgency to you hunting for life-giving flies. So all-in-all, it's probably a good addition.