Magic school adventure always gets my vote! Some really solid worldbuilding and character creation in here. Also, the design aesthetic and music make for a very immersive experience. One suggestion that I would make is to see how you can direct the flow of choices - I wanted to get to a moment of action, where the story truly starts and I kept having to choose who to talk and then those conversations led to errors. Like, I know that's a bug you can fix, but I wanted to know more about what I was getting into before talking to someone. But a really cool start! I would love to play this again once the bugs are fixed.
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Thanks for the feedback! Definitely got a ways to go as I continue development!
The characters button gives a brief overview of each character, but I definitely plan to add more story for each of them. I haven't put it in yet, but I've also built the framework to include changing story text featuring different character actions.