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The demo was fantastic. I really loved it. I already answered the survey, but I wanted to address the subject I talked about in the survey and expand it. During my gameplay,  some of Alan's facial expression were kinda off, kinda uncanny and turned me off, sorry, haha. I believe there has to be a little rework in the expressions and maybe the model's face. But, besides that, everything was five by five. It was funny, it was sexy af (the wet clothing was way too hot, love it! We need more scenes like these), the lightning and environtment was cool. And I really love the choosing of the size of their butts; nothing better than men with big thighs and juicy bubbled butts.

Maybe you can add a story for the game, besides isolated strip games? Like, the more you play with one character, lets you unlock events of his story and further their relationship. Not a deep story; just something nice and easy-going to tied everything.

And with the MC's model, I think having 2 options from where too choose would be fine: one model with light skin colors and the other with dark skin tones, to give some diversity, should work well.

And that's my review. I really hope for more. Right now, Elie and Max are the ones catching my eyes the most; I'll be waiting for them, thristy. This game have so much potential, so if I can help you with something else or you need me to expand something of my review, just tell me.

Hugs.

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Thank you so much for this thoughtful and detailed feedback! I think I know what you mean about Alan's face. There's a few times, especially when he's stripping but before he's fully naked, that his mouth and eyes look unnatural.

Regarding story; I know what you mean. Part of what makes a VN so hot is the interplay between story and image. You develop an investment in the characters and then when they get busy it's even more sexy. That said, I'm not sure how much story this particular game will have. I'm not saying no, I'm just not sure yet. Part of why I chose to do this as my first game was because it doesn't really have a story and I felt it would allow me to better learn the software (Ren'Py/Daz) without getting too hung up on other stuff. 

I definitely plan on doing more story-driven projects in future. I also plan on using some of these characters in other stories where their roles will have more of an impact on the plot. And that said, I'm still not saying no to adding story details in this project, I'm just not sure yet.

Again, thanks so much for the feedback :D 

Okay, I played the demo again and I can stated that the main problem with Alan face, besides some strange expressions, is the eyes. Same with Elie's model picture here. Their eyes are kinda alien, I don't know. I think changing them for a more ordinary color, will help a lot. And also, if you're redoing Alan's model, maybe you could increase his tits size? He has already a big butt, but I believe in MAN BOOB supremacy, haha.

I believe in MAN BOOB supremacy

And, in regarding of the story, I thought of two options:

If you want a simple story: the MC gets inform of this "Casino" (or something) that, for money, you can play in 1on1 session with some guy, that works there, and if you win, you receive a special treatment, like a happy-ending massage, sorta. And after that, you can go on dates and develop your relationship with him.

If you want a longer/complex story: in this scenario, the MC is informed of a Tournament of Blackjack. So, you have your first encounter with Alan, and if you win, you face the next character (Dean, for example). As the days go by within each match, you get the chance to meet and develop your relationship with the guys you win matches against. There may also be a point system; let me explain my idea: you date, and if you answer correctly, you earn points. But also, you can replay the match with the guy in the same scenario, and see the same sex scene again, to earn more points. And when you earn enough points, you can play another match, in another setting, with different dialogue and a different sex scene, further developing your relationship.

I don't know if I explain myself correctly, but I hope so. And if this helped you in any way, fantastic. Keep up the good work.

PD.: if you will add more characters in the future, I will love to see a guy that is like Olivine from Nu:Carnival: a chaste/priest character that is so kinky but is so repress that he can't accept his "dark side". Also, Olivine has big tits, a big butt and a very summisive personality, haha.