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Oh, how sad. Because I was starting looking at models for practice and I wanted to have them as reference to use and modify. Thank you for answering

Hi, what are the names of 3D models you used for Matt and Leo? 

I loved the intro. So far, my favorite is Frank, but Gregor and Trent are also in my radar (Will be a threesome scene within Oliver and this two? Cause that'll be hot af). I'll be looking forward for the next updates.

Hugs.

I loved the new chapter, although was sort of short. But I understand that this VN have a lot of cinematics and very well done details that makes it worthy the wait.

I'm been liking the story so far. The AI voices are better and the graphics too. I liked the time options, good call.

But, what I loved more than everything is the Teacher. God, what a handsome man. I want more of him in the next updates.

Hugs.

I played your game a few days ago and its very promiscing. The graphics are very nice, the ai-voices can sound sometimes robotics, but overall are nice and adds inmersion to the game. I liked the story so far (I think there will be involve a lot of roleplaying and kinks haha). I dont have more to add, honestly. I'm excited for the next update. And if you're taking suggestions for your game, I have an idea that may interested you: a male nurse character that is very soft and nice to the main protagonist, but who deep down is very repressive of his kinks, so the Mc basically can "corrupt" him so he gives in to his lust; also, I imagine his physique very bara-like (very big man-boobs and a big round ass)

I copied something that I put in the form; its an idea for a character that I never seen being portrait in any gay visual novel or game: "a himbo character, with exaggerated pecs and butt, super cute and adorable, but deeply repress sexual-wise, who becomes the MC's gymbro, and because of it, the MC take the chance to "help him" to train, touching him with the excuse that is helping, and slowly, each training session they have, the touching becomes more invasive, the himbo likes it but repress it, and the corruption spiral goes on and on, until we discover that the himbo is a submissive bottom with nasty kinks."

Hi, sorry to bother, but there's a song that stayed with me after I finished the game. It's the one that plays when Adam and Evan are watching the fireworks at night, the music during the CG scene. Is it original? Can I find it somewhere else?

Personally, I'm very into, gamewise, atheletic/fit guys with very big pecs (and asses too). I'm just very fond of that, haha. And, I know that that type of bodies are very unrealistic, but hell, it's a game, it's a fantasy. So, yes, I'll love to see this big guys worshipping and working out their big, and maybe unrealistic, pecs and asses. :D

I've played your game and it looks fantastic; and I'm very intriged about this daydreams plotline. The art is very good and even has music to solidy the game experience. I'll keep an eye on this VN and watch as it develops. Good luck with your game and happy premiere. Hugs.

PD: I really like the body of the characters, nothing to complain here; rather, I only have good things to say. I'm very fond of gym, workout and body worship porn (like JimmyZ Bodybuilder's Jam), so this for me is glorious, haha. So, if in the future you're going to add more characters and/or remake some of the one you already have, the bigger their boobs and ass, the better for me, haha (I can only imagine Ed with bigger tits and... 🤤😋)

Okay, I played the demo again and I can stated that the main problem with Alan face, besides some strange expressions, is the eyes. Same with Elie's model picture here. Their eyes are kinda alien, I don't know. I think changing them for a more ordinary color, will help a lot. And also, if you're redoing Alan's model, maybe you could increase his tits size? He has already a big butt, but I believe in MAN BOOB supremacy, haha.

And, in regarding of the story, I thought of two options:

If you want a simple story: the MC gets inform of this "Casino" (or something) that, for money, you can play in 1on1 session with some guy, that works there, and if you win, you receive a special treatment, like a happy-ending massage, sorta. And after that, you can go on dates and develop your relationship with him.

If you want a longer/complex story: in this scenario, the MC is informed of a Tournament of Blackjack. So, you have your first encounter with Alan, and if you win, you face the next character (Dean, for example). As the days go by within each match, you get the chance to meet and develop your relationship with the guys you win matches against. There may also be a point system; let me explain my idea: you date, and if you answer correctly, you earn points. But also, you can replay the match with the guy in the same scenario, and see the same sex scene again, to earn more points. And when you earn enough points, you can play another match, in another setting, with different dialogue and a different sex scene, further developing your relationship.

I don't know if I explain myself correctly, but I hope so. And if this helped you in any way, fantastic. Keep up the good work.

PD.: if you will add more characters in the future, I will love to see a guy that is like Olivine from Nu:Carnival: a chaste/priest character that is so kinky but is so repress that he can't accept his "dark side". Also, Olivine has big tits, a big butt and a very summisive personality, haha.

The demo was fantastic. I really loved it. I already answered the survey, but I wanted to address the subject I talked about in the survey and expand it. During my gameplay,  some of Alan's facial expression were kinda off, kinda uncanny and turned me off, sorry, haha. I believe there has to be a little rework in the expressions and maybe the model's face. But, besides that, everything was five by five. It was funny, it was sexy af (the wet clothing was way too hot, love it! We need more scenes like these), the lightning and environtment was cool. And I really love the choosing of the size of their butts; nothing better than men with big thighs and juicy bubbled butts.

Maybe you can add a story for the game, besides isolated strip games? Like, the more you play with one character, lets you unlock events of his story and further their relationship. Not a deep story; just something nice and easy-going to tied everything.

And with the MC's model, I think having 2 options from where too choose would be fine: one model with light skin colors and the other with dark skin tones, to give some diversity, should work well.

And that's my review. I really hope for more. Right now, Elie and Max are the ones catching my eyes the most; I'll be waiting for them, thristy. This game have so much potential, so if I can help you with something else or you need me to expand something of my review, just tell me.

Hugs.

Thank you for answering. It's amazing how you wanna structure the relationships dynamics. Completely in love with this level of deep and care. On board with this VN to the end.

And also valuable the option to choose to follow a trans-path. Representation is always good and needed.

Hi, I came across this game and I have to say that its amazing.

I love the world-building; is nice to find an erotic game that has a well structure plot, and how the elements of nuclear war are frame with the mystic and elements of Ragnarok; very well thought.

I had some problems with the cursor; it was kinda difficult to navigate sometimes.

And also, with the meat and corn; I had to restart because I didn't pass the practice and I wasted the money in flowers in the kr, hahaha.

But, except for that, everything five-by-five.

The CGs, the atmosphere, the music are amazing. (Jorgen wet CG is soooo hot, fuck, hahaha).

The intro song blow my mind; it truly makes you feel hopeless, because of what happen, but also hopeful, for a brighter future, even if its difficult to achive.

Overall, its a very consistent demo; I even dare to say that is the best demo from this type of games, by far. And if the demo is so expectacular, I can't imagine how great will be the future versions.

The characters are all handsome and hot (for now, my favorite is Jorgen, of course). Aaaand, these is where my feedback is gonna be more specific.

There's something that I couldn't quite understand.

In the menu, it says that the characters that you can romance are attracted to feminine or masculine qualities.

Does that mean to feminine or masculine bodies or rather if they have traditional masculine or feminine actitudes (e.g. cooking is femenine and hunting is masculine)?

Honestly, if I have to choose, I'd chose the second option.

I'm more fond on the idea of building the psycholocigal part rather than the physical, because I think is more interesting to see how the dynamics between the guys and your character shift because the choices you make, with more femenine aprroach (like protect, help, emotions) or more masculine aprroach (attack, been more agressive, command, etc.), rathen than a change in the anatomy.

And also, it would be kinda restriction, because maybe you want to romance someone who want feminine anatomy but you don't wanna change the body of your character.

What I'm saying is that, the idea of feminize/masculinize the MC is good, but shouldn't be determinate for the romances. Seeing how the romanceable characters treat you because of your feminine or masculine aprroach to life, I think is better because you can explore their psychological side too, mostly in a post-apocalyptic enviroment where everybody is in constant alert, viligance, danger; all very traumatizing, haha.

(EXAMPLE; In the case of Jostein: he only want to be with someone with feminine actitude, probably because he has a wife, so feminize the body would make Britt more close to the ideal of the wife he has. But, I believe it would be more interesting that you have feminine actitudes, but not body, and see how Jostein has to deal with the fact that maybe he's atracted to a masculine guy, but with a more submissive and feminine social role. That will make a more compelling story and we as player could empathize with his struggles (again, feminize Britt body could be an option too; having both choices to makes, can show what consequences each one develop, making a path more challeging than the other, for example)

How the dynamics shifts, helps to construct a better world-building for all the characters (even better because of the Factions, where usually some prefer one lifestyle/approch to life, different than other).

Also, that doesn't mean anything about the sexual orientation or sexual role of a character (e.g. One character may prefer feminine actitudes/choices, but then is more submissive/bottom).

I think, having 9 romanceable characters, you can play a lot with the psychology and the deep of everyone, making this a more immersive experience.

And that's it. Thank you for reading; I hope my feedback helped you with something. If you wanna me to expand or explain or help you with something, I'm willing.

Hugs, keep the good work. Seeya.

It's not unfortunate, because this delay means a longer scene, and that's always amazing.

In my opinion, any delay that happens to improve the release product is worth the way, so don't worry. I'll be glad to wait.

Hugs.

Today is the public release or tomorrow?

Okay, I have many things to say/praise, so I'm gonna divide this comment in sections.

Concept: as a concept, the story is fresh and intriguing. The assigment that Connor is given is quite unusual, so I believe this will create interesting dynamics within the chracters and Connor, helping his process of self-discovery. Very intrigue and  ready for this journey.

Graphics: polished as fuck, everything looks gorgeous. I always prioritize the story in visual novels, but the graphics are important too. And I have to say that, from the characters to the backgrounds, everything is beyond my expectations. Top tier!

Characters: I divided this for the main five.

• Connor: I really like that the MC is not a naïve boy who doesn't understand anything; I love the way Connor teases Riley, saying "I'm making you uncomfortable?" or that one of the posible answers for Leo is "I guess will see". Having an interesting MC sometimes is hard in choice-based games because you have to balance between giving him his own personality and how the choices you, as the player, make will affect him. But I considered that you nailed it, well done.
• Matt: He's so hot and so nice at the same time. Completely in love with his tenderness and cuteness. Looking forward for more of him and the story they both shared, and how it will evolve from now on.
• Leo: My favorite by far. Love his impulsive and sexy actitude. I really think they will have a lot of chemistry and good things will come within Connor and him. I already imagined him and Connor hitting the gym and Leo making Connor to touch him, using the exercises as an excuse for some "steamy" training, haha.
• Riley: The definicion of adorkable, haha. The teasing withing Connor and him was amazing, and making him a writer too, I believe will create some safe space where they can help eachother to grow. Plus, he has the BEST ASS!
• Marco: I'm very intrigue about him, mostly because of his aura, full of mystery and slyness. Not to much to say about him, but intrigued me enoguh to keep diging about him in future updates.

And, as a side note, I loved the way you introduced each character, giving each a color and a epithet.

In conclusion, an amazing intro, with a promised bright future.

Hope my review was worth your time and maybe help you with something. Keep the good work, you are doing it great.

Hugs.

1.3 is amazing. I have nothing bad to say, only praises. The english is kinda harsh but is understandable; the message was receive, don't worry.

I loved knowing more about Sam's soft side and Ethan's powers. I was thinking he was like a incubus or something, but when he healed the tree my theory fell down, haha. 

I really enjoyed this only-Sam update (although my favorite for now is Ray). And I like the idea of maybe a three-pair/polyamory relationship.

I'm really looking forward for 1.4 and take Ray route, but for now, everything is amazing and keeps getting better.

Keep the good work, man.

Hugs.

Number 1 intrigues me, and he's definitely hot, but his smile seem odd, maybe force, but he's smoking hot. But, also I agree with the last comment, that Number 6 is very eye-catching, and I feel he's very naughty, haha.

Today will you release 1.3? Sorry if I seem impatient; I'm just really excited to know more about Sam

Would there be a free update or are you gonna wait  to release v1.4 later?

You're welcome, I'm glad to help. I think is important to give feedback, because that way we help the devs; mostly, when the adult gay games are so few in comparation to the straight ones.

And, I'm glad you like my idea, and I hope to give you more ideas/suggestions for scenes as the updates comes, if you don't mind, of course.

Hughs, Aru. Keep the good work, man.

I played the 1.2 version, and I have to say that surpassed my expectations. It was funny at the beggining and reflexive at the end (of both routes). And learning a little about the mystery of the story was interesting; I wasn't expecting that twist, it truly caught me off guard, haha.

On the routes, well... Damn! Super hot and the teasing is amazing; I love the innuendos of the dialogues and this kinda cat and mouse game where the control always changes, where isn't clear who is the dom and sub (no in sexual position, in the power dinamic I mean) because the narrative let the player know different facets of the three characters. You get to know these men: their virtues, but also their insecurities and pain. I think that was my favorite part of the update, and yes, the sexual tension is fantastic I'm not gonna lie, but the storytelling is what keeps the story going and its good.

So, in conclusion, very well done, Aru. And also, I love Ethan's change; now he's could also be called a hunky daddy: perfect arms, perfect pecs and perfect ASS (we need more naked Ethan please, haha)

PS: If you let me make a suggestion story-wise, I imagined a scene in my head because of Ethan's powers. Basically, Ethan offers Ray a massage, because Ray is in pain or he slept bad, and Ray accepts. The action takes place in bed: Ray is sitting on it and Ethan is behind, and start to massage his shoulders. As he goes with it, his eyes start to glow, and Ray start to feel hot, so Ethan suggest him to take some of his clothes off. And as he continues the massage, Ray feels more hot and start to take more clothes off. In short, is a slowly strip-tease + muscle worship scene. I think something like that could be very arousing (and fun).

When will this version be public?

A medieval fantasy adult gay game? Sign me up.

I'll keep an eye on it.

Awesome. I love we think alike. Those scenes I'm sure will be amazing. Can't wait!

P.S. Is there a full body front picture of Luis in that sexy red outfit (the one he has on the banner and on the first photo)? I'll love to see that😏 

An amazing start to a promising VN; Luis is the hottest guy ever (those pecs, and THAT ass! Stunning)

I'm dying for you to add, if you allow me some suggestions,  a lot of scenes with a lot of "unwanted" touches during the photo sessions, strip-teases and hot training in gym.

Very cool and waiting for the next update. 

Here again, reporting to make my review. Hope you don't mind them, Erwin, haha.

This public version finishes Day 2 in the story; actually, I was thinking that it was not much to add, but no, there's actually a lot of content, not just a closure to Day 2. And a very sexy and passional content, I have to say. This version connects the end if Day 2, with the beggining of Day 3: Camp Day with the bros. I'm looking forward of know more about Carlos (mostly because of the joke he makes when you pick what to drink; the capuccino one is my favorite. Just because he said 'you like creamy' I know I'm gonna love him, haha) . Also, I loved the Bound by Night cameo/reference, another interesting VN. I love this new generation of LGBT VNs that are focusing alot in create a balance withing the erotica and storytelling, instead of being just a bunch of sex scene because fanservice. No that there's anything wrong with that, but its nice to have this beautiful balance of story and sex, this diversity in LGBT games, for everyones flavors.

So, overall, amazing. I'm ecxting for Camp Day. Something juicy awaiting for us, the public. I can feel it, hahaha.

PS.: Erwin, you devil, you keep teasing with the gym! Have pity of us, and give us the gym already, haha. 

I need to see them training. I'm very excting for that; more specifically, bacause of the Uncle (#TeamUncle), but you already know that about me, xD. I remember you told that you like my idea (the gym, the Uncle, etc.) that I gave you long ago, so, if you let me give you another one (connected to this one),  I believe it would be amazing if, after training, Matt can take a shower with them (or make a choose within Fabien or Uncle). And you know, anything can happen there, haha.

Hugs, Erwin. Keep being amazing. 

So, to see if I understand, patrons have until day 3 (inclusive), while the public will have until the end of day 2 next week.

By the way, Happy Birthday (whatever day it is). Hugs man, enjoy your day and be proud of this amazing project you're working on.

That answer... Erwin, you diabolical...

Good to meet someone else that is in the same boat as me, haha.

This version is outstanding.

Love everything about it. The graphics are amazing and polish, the writing is on point, the story is following an interesting path. Everything is 10/10.

This uptade to the story was a rollercoaster, and its not even finished! If this is the beggining, I can't wait for the middle. Amazing in every aspect.

I can't wait for the rest (I'm looking forward for the gym part, specially, and more content with the Uncle, haha)

And, man, I loved the part when SPOILERS, Fabien fixes Mat hair. So lovely and cute. 

After all, it's summer, so you don't even need an excuse for that, haha. 

I think it would be fun and hot if they ask you to touch their bodies and the more you do it, the more clothes they ask you to take off them, haha. So much potential, I love this

I completly agree with you in everything you said. I tried to use the most polite words I could write to not be harsh with my thoughts. I tried to  be everything but harsh, but yeah, maybe give him such a big text so early on development, can be seen as a little to much, hahaha. He is putting effort, love and passion in this work and it shows. And I know that, as time passes, this VN will become incredible.

With that being said, I gave my feedback because, as a fellow writer that I am, I know that sometimes, some expressions or ideas I use (in my native language or in english), can look good, but then, when I put my work out there for people to read, it may be a little confusing. And its even harder when you try to translate it. Its a mess sometimes, hahaha. 

Noting bad or outerly wrong in his writing, as I stated in my feedback, just some minor fixes to make everything smooth and to be as much inmerssive as it can be. I gave my point of view more of as the type of feedback my friends give me with my writing than from a critic, I think, but yeah, I recorgnice what you tell me and I also aprecciate your feedback to my feeeback, haha.

Hugs to you, man. 

A very promising coming-of-age story. It was fun and endearing, so very well done.

In terms of feedback, I agree with some others comments. Some facial expressions were kinda weird, but they weren't as many to be a problem. But, let's be honest, we people something make weird faces, so, ironically, it feels natural, organic, more so, since you're portraing an awkard young adult discovering his sexuality and himself. So, I think that, as long as doesn't affect any key moments of the story, is not that big deal.

Some sentences and expressions need some corrections, because can slow a little the pacing of the story when you are reading it. But, again, since is not your first language (mine neither, so take this part of the review with a grain of salt because I'm on the same page like you, haha), the overall work is very well executed. So, a minor fix here and there and thats all.

The characters are charismatic and sexy, and the dialogues are good. I would like, anyway, read a little bit more to have a bigger picture, but so far, so good.

The context, the enviroment of the story, this fancy house in the middle of nowhere during holidays, is a very good way to create an ambiente of closeness and intimacy (and also, for crazy things to happen, haha). I really like it (I want a house like that, to be honest)

In terms of ideas, I think it would be nice to read about Silvia, the aunt. Not now, anyway, but in the future. I know its a gay game, and the expectations can be others, but you're telling a story, so that's the reason why I think (at least a little) it would be nice to have content of her and her story.

But, if we talk about the spicy stuff, I have 2 primary ideas:

1- Since they sleep together, a lot things can happen overnight (like waking up with one hugging the other; for more fun and akward situations, Fabien should be the one doing this)

2- The family has a gym, so I think a muscle worship scene would be just fine. Maybe the Uncle can be the one encouraging Mathew to touching him and so (he's has such a big lewd aura, haha)

So, that's all. I hope my review help you in any way. Hugs and good luck with this amazing project.