Cute game, I didn't make it to the end because I got stuck down a hole, I tried the blue crystal but I guess I didn't get the timing right and I couldn't remember what the flame said about how to restart!
The opening dialogue was a little long IMO (and it says press E to continue even when there is no more dialogue), the breaking of the 4th wall did give me a chuckle though. I think we can all related to having only a short time left and having to compromise on things!
Maybe I missed it in the instructions but it wasn't clear that I had to press 1 (and later 2) to select the crystal I wanted to use. I pressed F a lot and nothing happened!
I thought the lag/damping on the camera move was too much for me. I ended up going through a portal before I finished the level because I went all the way to the right of my screen and it was just off-camera
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These are all great tips! When I was watching my brother play I saw some of these issues. The portal thing happened to him a lot. I think I could add a look-ahead time for the camera. That would definitely be helpful. The dialogue was also at parts cutoff. I definitely think I can take your advice and fix up the game to make it better. I also watched my friend play it and I think the beginning dialogue made him scared to talk to other people because it was so long. Thank you!