These are all great tips! When I was watching my brother play I saw some of these issues. The portal thing happened to him a lot. I think I could add a look-ahead time for the camera. That would definitely be helpful. The dialogue was also at parts cutoff. I definitely think I can take your advice and fix up the game to make it better. I also watched my friend play it and I think the beginning dialogue made him scared to talk to other people because it was so long. Thank you!