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Fun

Not enjoyable.  A platformer but with nothing innovative and plagued with bugs.

Aesthetics

Very nice pixel art.  Looks professional. No complaints.

Music

It is a bit of a low tempo, creepy score. The music itself is good, but it is a bit of a stretch to say it matches the cuter art style, even if the tiles are in a dungeon.

Sound

Outside of the background music, I didn't hear anything.

Mechanics

Bad. You can't see below you, and the game starts with you falling onto spikes you can't see. The movement speed is medium, and the jumping acceleration is very high, so even the movement clashes. 

When you die, you get rocketed to the right. I thought this might be some sort of gravity puzzle mechanic, but it turns out it is just a bug. That's a shame. A gravity puzzle with death would have been very cool.

Often you aren't sure if you are touching the hitbox of hazards such as saws.

Story

None as far as I am aware

Theme

Doesn't try to do anything with death. This is just a platformer. Music and wall tiles clash with character sprite. 


Good job on your first jam, but this feels more like you just wanted the free course. 

Thanks a lot for your detailed comments.
They are definitely useful points that I have overlooked.

Music, Sound Effects and Feedback Effects were not included due to time. I understand that it's a week long but due to the indecisiveness on what to build, I only did it 3 days before. Only to be shocked by Unity that I can lose all my codes without knowing what happen 1 day before. But it forced me to learn git for my unity (but those are my problems).

The concept is just to go back to the start when the player dies - "DEATH IS ONLY THE BEGINNING!".
However it seems like I did not provide sufficient features to kill the player or a stage long enough to show this.

Maybe I may have also overthink on the features too. The idea is let the user to know that they should not just drop down if they do not know what is below. There are 'small' clues on how to progress safely for each obstacles.

This is a great first game jam for me as I really learned a lot, forced to complete, did not expect someone to try my game and am super happy someone tried it with constructive comments on how I can improve (Your game is also an inspiration - https://itch.io/jam/gamedevtv-jam-2022/rate/1553825).

Thanks again.