Fun
Did not enjoy it. Ever had that controller that drifted? Very frustrating. Maybe if you enjoy flappy bird you might like this.
Aesthetics
Fantastic. Reminds me of celeste. Looks professional and could see a commercial game with this art.
Music
Fantastic. Commercial game level quality. Fits the game and isn't distracting.
Sound
Sounds like sfxr. Not a good match for this game art.
Mechanics
You often jump out of view, and mid air jumps only work occasionally. I respect trying new ideas, but forced movement and precision platforming did not feel good.
I could see the potential for a mobile game with this mechanic. I am undecided if this is a genius idea or an awful one. Maybe just have the timed jump by itself, or the force right movement. They seem too much together, but they might work by themselves.
Story
None as far as I am aware.
Theme
It feels like this was designed for the theme "It is a feature not a bug". I don't feel that this qualifies as a game where "Death is only the beginning".