This was so much fun!
I thought it was really interesting to see the direction you took vs the prejam version - it's entirely different in terms of feel with the focus more on speed and escapes than the pure stealth of the original. I think it's the right direction to go, as the new version feels much more engaging to me. Also impressed by the technical and visual improvements: the camera feels significantly better in the new version, and the visual style feels much stronger and more refined.
Gameplay is tight and focussed, with a great run and slide mechanic that's really nicely integrated with the level design. Placement of enemies is great, and pushed me into many risky maneuvres and very close escapes.