This is a very "programmer's game". It's minimalist and almost stylized the the colors and the font. It's hard to present such a game as it has walls of text, no music, and almost no graphics. But it's something simple and functional, a good start. It actually reminds me of the very first game I ever made. But yours looks and reads a lot better!
A game like this relies on the text, suspense and mystery to go on. So, in the end, your game's value depends on how good of a writer you are.