Since I've pretty much given my thoughts as a whole on the main game page, I'll just give some responses specific to this update.
-I really liked the tweaks to the dialogue in general, especially with the ending text. It's nice to get some more closure to what happened to Werner even if the endings are still kinda just as depressing as before.
-It's funny how much more relaxing the game is playing through it a second time. I really was convinced the first time around that the ship was going to explode if I crashed into an asteroid or wandered into the nebula for too long.
-I found the coordinates to the secret signal in Dionysus, which I'm presuming is part of the easter eggs you're talking about. I heard something play in the background but I don't know if I'm supposed to make anything out of it or if this triggers some other event in-game.
-Since you're looking for typos, I spotted one in the intro text- "Crew members for these vessells will spend years, often decades, living alone within the far reaches of space"- should be "vessels"