Thoughts from my playthrough:
- Idre or Dire. Which is it?
- Why are there quotation marks around the dialog text?
- Cute edits of the RTP sprites to make "evil" versions.
- Grammar error: "all some days off"
Overall I liked it. It's a cute game similar to last year's entry. Nothing too hard or cryptic about it, and doesn't overstay its welcome. Too bad about not getting that ending made, that would have been a nice top off to the experience. Good job!