Boy... I did what you asked, read, reread, reread again, I took advantage of the fact that I had free time and spent a good amount of time reading, calmly and patiently.
First, I make it clear that I don't know the developer.
I'm not a game developer, I don't even know how to program anything, I'm a guy who likes to read, and write, and as a physics student and having worked with police and lawyers, I love logic.
That said, everything I say is not personal, it's just my honest opinion and I'll be extremely honest.
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I read everything from the beginning of the game until the night he goes to the room to listen to the recording, I stopped there, because I was already out of patience for so much idiocy, many mistakes both in his actions, as in the actions of the other characters, I could write a book on how not to be a detective using this MC as an example.
During the convent, when questioning the sisters, he shows that he was really trying to conclude the case, he doesn't scoff, he's focused, but I agree with Miriam, "He lacks intelligence and wisdom!", imagine the echo that must have in the head of the MC due to the absence of a brain, seeing him trying to pressure his sister Delilah for example was a joke "are you lying to me Delilah?" Seriously? he should really be a comedian because he is a joke in human form. Is this how he wants to apply psychological pressure? not even a child falls for it. And worst of all is the seriousness with which he says it, as if he's saying "ArE yOu LyInG tO mE dEliLaH?" I would laugh in the face of a guy like that, and it only gets worse when he goes to accuse Teresa, she literally played with him there, instead of making a more subtle approach, no he decided to kick the door, if she wanted to get out of there what would he do? run after her and tell Spade she was to blame? I know it's a murder investigation, but an aggressive approach only works when you have a sense of the person's personality, and he clearly didn't have that. Continuing my torture session, he had already passed on to the sisters that he came to complete the case, despite being a rookie he proved to be a hardworking detective....dumb but hardworking, with that in mind, it makes no sense none had acted like a complete moron around Victoria, as the other sisters had contact with him, it was only Victoria asking the sisters how he acted in the investigation before she arrived, which easily all the effort he put in to be the fool of the court in front of her would fall, she had only to ask how he conducted the investigation, he didn't play the clown around the sisters, so making a fool of himself around Victoria would obviously be a trap.
Historical mistakes also happen, like the spear, this one was heartbreaking "the recovery of the lance was used to inspire the offensive against the muslims on the first crusade", whatever they're teaching about religious history, they're teaching it wrong Hell, the spear was used as propaganda during the siege of Antiquoia, and it was used towards the end of the siege, when Christian troops were disinheriting due to the heat and lack of water and supplies, all of which added to the news that the Muslims were sending reinforcements of 200,000 Turks into the city, to attack the Christians, the soldiers' morale was low, so a monk named Bartholomew claimed to have received a message from God, saying that the spear of Longinus would be in a church in the city, he went there and appeared with a spear saying that that was the spear of Longinus, this boosted the morale of the crusaders who managed to drive the Muslims out of the city. But she speaks as if the spear was the reason for the first crusade. No shit! the spear was used in a siege and towards the end of this siege, it was not the cause of the crusade. The reason was completely different, it was the retaking of the holy land that started with Pedro de Amiens, and soon after it intensified with the summons of Pope Urban II, and the mistakes don't stop there, there's a lot of shit ahead, it would be possible to transform history of this MC in a "Codex Gigas of shit", the more I read, the worse it got, I don't know what kind of "Big Brain Time" went through his head, when he saw that wiretap, he thought he was doing well, being the good of the story, the master of detective wizards.
Fucking idiot! injecting someone with an unknown substance, and on top of that directly into the bloodstream.. what could go wrong shit Sherlock?....let me guess... SHE COULD JUST DIE? AND WITH THAT HE WOULD BE TRAPPED IN THE BEST OF HYPOTHESES? BECAUSE THERE WAS ALSO THE HIGH POSSIBILITY OF VITORIA'S FAMILY TO KILL HIM, AND THAT WOULD PROBABLY HAPPEN. Holy shit, what was going through this guy's head? First, it is not easy to hit a vein, no matter how large the veins in the neck are, this does not mean that training is not necessary, as even doctors make mistakes, and often it has serious consequences. Infections, hemorrhages, and even death. HE COULD HAVE KILLED HER. It's already a bad idea to inject someone with something. Injecting something unknown then is a certificate of idiot, a guy like that only serves to make weight in the world, even if the capsules he injected were safe and he was a "Carlos Chagas" of life, it would still be a ridiculous idea, because he didn't you know if she could have any reaction to these capsules, or if these capsules could dissolve, then she would have a micro recorder full of toxic components coursing through her bloodstream.
Congratulations genius.
But the problem is not just him, Vitória is just not stupid anymore because she is just one. She already knew he was a detective, she says it herself, she had his profile, he's even surprised that she knows his last name, without him telling. With all this, how is this woman not suspicious when he gives her the injection? HOLY FUCKING SHIT! is a bloody needle piercing her flesh, and she just thinks it's a caress? what kind of person caresses by piercing another's neck? she doesn't even suspect the idiot was up to something. Anyone would have recoiled from the pain, and she knew he was a detective, it was obvious something was wrong. That's not overconfidence, it's ridiculous, if in the MC's head it echoes, in hers there would be room to do a Bon Jovi show. It seems that there is no reflex act in her. But at least I could laugh at some stupid things, like that asshole who went to take the camera away. How did he not see that he had a second camera? if it was a micro camera, it would be understandable, but my friend...... that thing is almost the size of an adult Shih-Tzu. "but he's wearing a mask..he can't see right" you could see such crap even with sunglasses living in China. But I'll excuse him, he must be a fan of "BLIND guardian", and his favorite song must be "follow the BLIND"
That's it, I read, reread, reread it again, for hours, and now I have no doubts, the story is horrible, I had said that I liked the game until then, I take back what I said, I started to hate it, I hadn't paid attention to so many errors, if such a detective exists in Brazil, I guarantee he doesn't exist anymore. I don't need to say why. Once again, I emphasize that I have nothing against the developer, for those who read what I wrote, and enjoyed the game, keep playing and enjoy. This is merely my opinion, for me the game is horrible. I know I'm not at an airport, but I'll announce my departure anyway. Bye and good game everyone. I will stop here because i want to sleep and because i don't care anymore. Goodnight.