This made my entire day!!! I was so nervous and stressed for time adding everything, it means the world to see your comment!! And thank you for the feedback about the fighting system!! It is a weakness of mine and now I know what changes I should make if I continued to work on it!
I love that you made the connection to rune factory!! It was a huge inspiration! Shame you didn't make it to the ending (of which im super proud of, but I appreciate you playing at all!!!
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You sure have some japanese quirks in here. I found some bugs that the game could fix. When you fight genko and lose you lose a day and you cant participate the last event of apprenticing. Catching those bugs was a pain. They soooo fast XD
I managed to ask shiori out...And you know what? This is already too much yuri for me hahaha. Though the dialogue when matsuki is happy to actually finally go out with her sounded very genuine 0.0 That was my favorite part.
After talking to shiori so many times, matsuki is hopelessly romantic lol...but good for her to finally get the girl.
You know putting your name and this yuri game and some japanese theme, i get it now lol....
I like the gnome spasm in the tavern. That was funny. Unless that was a bug? lol
The ending was surprising. The game really picked up after that but it ended sooo soon after the denial factors and such when choosing what happened. That was very hooking for me.
I didn't even bother touching the forest. That was toooo much for me. I tried to train in that forest...i died too many times lol
When you talk to the golden bird, she tell you about cleaning the church but cant cause of the expansion. I was laughing. You broke the 4th barrier there.
After those positive feedback, imma give you some constructive feedbacks too!
At the beginning of the game, the first time I played it, I couldn't tell who was the main character in the house when the family was all talking to each other. So I wasn't that attached since i had no idea who was the main character until the event ended.
the five days in this village didn't feel like I wanted to explore more. You could quickly skip the days by apprenticing all the folks without talking to everyone. I tried this and I tried talking to everyone to change the ending but it was futile lol I would've like more of a grab while I'm in the village. Maybe some type of drama that's happening in the village. Genko was a good drama inducer as he hates humans. But it would be nice to add more stuff or expand how genko hates humans in those 5 days along with other characters back story? since this'll help with your ending a lot more. Iunno....
Well those are my constructive criticism :D
Thank you so much!! I planned to have more cutscenes between characters like the one between Genko and Tolkien on day 3 (bonus points to you if you noticed her anger text at the end matches his in his rant), but the time crunch was real. I just barely got everything I wanted in there and I genuinely wanted to flesh the ending dialogues more but..meh such is life.
I definitely need to make it a bit more suggested to talk to everyone each day and to add further cutscenes with everyone (lol and the forest is an understandable nightmare).
I actually was really proud of the text with shiori. I based a lot of it on my own relationship and I'm grateful it shined through.
Thank you for giving me such thorough feedback. I saw when the first year of this contest happened, but was too hesitant to join. This is my first publicly shared game, and if it gets good feedback I'd love nothing more than to build the sequel.
People like you make the world go round!!
