As others have said, the camera should always lead the player especially in platforming. Who did the music? I didn't see any mentioned in the credits, cuz it had a NIN vibe I loved. Granted, the music did make me anxious for terror despite the simple happy fetch quest the game was.
Game was short, but got the job done. You submitted something in the short timeframe and should be happy! Some graphical glitches were there, yeah, but I think this could be updated and fleshed out.