i did not know yoshika was a minecraft zombie that explodes in the daytime, but that explains a lot about why everybody has a hat. probably the same for remilia
i see that in the path selection and choosing who to talk to at the bar, it shows the other two options after you pick one of them. at first it seems like its getting rid of options youve selected before but then they show up again when you pick something else. i appreciate the intent but it would be best if you went all the way with some flags or just always showed all the options
personally i do not acknowledge ".." as a valid expression in anything other than lua (not english) so that bothered me but not a huge deal
anyway sorry for complaining its neat i like it and all the art is very nice, i like the detail and the departure from your average anime artstyle
keep at it