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Your mouse movement somehow feels floaty. I don't know why tho or if its maybe just me. I'm remembering I forgot to eat anything today just as I'm writing this.

Menu changes seem slow, it kind of blends into the next menu, would like them to be a lot faster.

I like your main menu music, very soothing. Why can I save from the main menu? there shouldn't be a save option there.

Intro has a bunch of missing font character image squares. Might be intended, but doesn't look like it.

Couldn't get a really good look at the protagonist through the computer, as it faded away too soon. 

Dialogue with the girl has "there's there's" written in when the basket guy appears. A lot of the Dialogue kind of comes of as pretentious to me, like everyones trying to sound smarter then they are. No Idea if that is how people actually talk tho. Still, it managed to attach me to the characters, I got pretty sad when Flame died. Who writes their Diary in notepad format? And in one without any of the key information the Notes are about aswell. And cutting up sentences? This really sounds more like talking to oneself then writing a diary.

You should've warned me that there was romantic handholding in this. ( just wish it were with Jack, he's cute). And after all that Handholding you're putting me with a basically naked Jack into a Sauna? Are you sure this isn't a lewd Game?

Why are the sandwiches getting cold? Sandwiches are cold to begin with.

Nice that I could poke Jack in the end, but why only then, why not earlier?

Just loaded the nameguess to get all the Endings, not going to bother with the different routes, ending itself was pretty boring, unless I missed an option (tried All the student names, professor, my own, eerie, and various phrases and words)

I had something I wanted to complain about pretty early on, but I forgot through playing the Game, sorry. If I ever remember it, I'll edit this comment, but I doubt it.

Still enjoyable overall tho, had me engaged for multiple Hours, didn't expect to play through it.

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>mouse/menu lag

Are you using windowed mode? For whatever reason the engine doesn't like it.

>save from the main menu

That's not a thing.  Are you talking about the right-click menu?

>missing font, typos

Fixed in next release.

>pretentious dialog

The protagonist and Jack use a purposely limited vocabulary. Everyone else uses big words because they consider themselves to be big-brained.

>Why are the sandwiches getting cold?

that's the joke.jpg

>endings

That's the normal ending - it's supposed to be a purposely lazy solution. You can start the true end by naming the true culprit twice. Next release will all you to bypass that if you start off by naming them. Note that finishing the true end actually requires thinking and solving things if you want to do it legitimately. It's for people care.

When I typed the protags name once, I got the long winded Dialogue and suicide part, then it returned me to the main menu which had a save screen once the credits finished. I couldn't save from there, but the option to go into a save screen shouldn't even be there. It also had a loading screen, but thats fine obviously.

I don't really know how I'm supposed to name the protagonist twice, if I'm returning to the menu after the first Time, but maybe something just bugged out on my end, or I messed something up. I played it drained of every Energy I had, so I probably just did something wrong. As for what I forgot to mention, You get a ton of Hints by investigating, which you can kind of use to give you the better/correct answer in the answer parts of the Game? Thats fine, but I think you get way too many. I could basically use one at every answer. 

Just some things to keep in mind I guess if you're making another one of those Games in the future, maybe even a longer one. (Just let me poke Jack from the beginning then, I liked to do that).