Your mouse movement somehow feels floaty. I don't know why tho or if its maybe just me. I'm remembering I forgot to eat anything today just as I'm writing this.
Menu changes seem slow, it kind of blends into the next menu, would like them to be a lot faster.
I like your main menu music, very soothing. Why can I save from the main menu? there shouldn't be a save option there.
Intro has a bunch of missing font character image squares. Might be intended, but doesn't look like it.
Couldn't get a really good look at the protagonist through the computer, as it faded away too soon.
Dialogue with the girl has "there's there's" written in when the basket guy appears. A lot of the Dialogue kind of comes of as pretentious to me, like everyones trying to sound smarter then they are. No Idea if that is how people actually talk tho. Still, it managed to attach me to the characters, I got pretty sad when Flame died. Who writes their Diary in notepad format? And in one without any of the key information the Notes are about aswell. And cutting up sentences? This really sounds more like talking to oneself then writing a diary.
You should've warned me that there was romantic handholding in this. ( just wish it were with Jack, he's cute). And after all that Handholding you're putting me with a basically naked Jack into a Sauna? Are you sure this isn't a lewd Game?
Why are the sandwiches getting cold? Sandwiches are cold to begin with.
Nice that I could poke Jack in the end, but why only then, why not earlier?
Just loaded the nameguess to get all the Endings, not going to bother with the different routes, ending itself was pretty boring, unless I missed an option (tried All the student names, professor, my own, eerie, and various phrases and words)
I had something I wanted to complain about pretty early on, but I forgot through playing the Game, sorry. If I ever remember it, I'll edit this comment, but I doubt it.
Still enjoyable overall tho, had me engaged for multiple Hours, didn't expect to play through it.