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WOW!!! Nikko always surprises me bahaha

This VN is damn awesome :D it's like reading one of your comics, but intensified 1000x haha


Waiting for more updates!! :D


*SPOILERS*







Loving the way it's progressing and am very curious to see how Ken route will continue going forward...


Also, damn the fucking rabbit scares the shit out of me :c


Liked the way u put the dialogues... I mean, the way the VN is discussing topics such as sexual orientation, love, drugs etc. 

I'm very curious to see how that will develop.


And, before I forget, DAMN, that Portuguese part on Ken's route was SOOOO cringy bahaha there are at least some centuries that no one talks like that in my country :P but it was interesting, nonetheless.


Besides that, the music is awesome! SFX is well selected and well used, the arts are fabulous in all aspects, UI, BG, sprites, CG...

They're very pretty and cute, and some of them damn hot bahaha 

Liked the way u put a new UI for the text while showing the terror parts.

I think the only thing missing on that menu is that I can't delete a save if I don't make another save to overwriter it :c


Oh, loved the concept of timeline and those audios/texts from some sort of diary or whatever, giving more pieces about the characters and the world they live, very creative that :D

And the atmosphere is very interesting there, there's even other music when u open that haha

I do confess I didn't understood some audio... actually only one think, which someone is just breathing heavily.

Curious to see what that "annotation" button will do exactly, and what will be its connection to the story haha.


Besides that, the rapid effects were a bit too much on Ken route, like, the hell dude, the text keeps moving up and down so fast that's almost impossible to read... and even with the rapid effects off, it's still moving a bit too fast - I mean, people with visual difficulty would still have trouble to read it, even with rapid effects off.


That extra story was kind of interesting :D don't know exactly where it fits on the main story but was enjoyable anyway.


Do u plan on adding a gallery later on? Maybe even a sound room or a way to see all the characters' sprites :D


Oh, and found some typos on Mark's route:

assoCiated



Not sure if that "youz" was intentional, 'cuz it's kinda weird.


Oh yeah, something I'm kinda curious about now: how many days do u plan on doing for each route?

And are there any plans on when releasing the Fox route? Like, if it will be on the next update or 3 updates forward...

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"Youz" is intentional. It's New York.

they talk like that there?

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A lot of older New Yorkers do. Keep in mind, Mark is in the 60s, so that's around the time period I'd expect for them to speak like that.