A beautiful gameplay, but the timing of the story doesn't feel quite right, I think it should be a little shorter, or include a tutorial level, just to break the ice and introduce you to the game.
The gameplay part is excellent, but the pride part doesn't feel quite right, it's just weird to be rewarded just like that, a little bit of challenge would be appreciated. Never played cookie run before, but I must say it's an awesome tribute if is as fun as this one.
Also, it's awesome to have hispanic representation, it would be nice to have the story translated as well. But great work overall!