Thanks for your feedback! Yeah, I understand what you mean about the story's pacing. We wanted to at least add illustrations for it but ran out of time. Playing levels between the story sections is a good idea.
Regarding Pride Time, Luyuu's comment did leave me thinking about it and I agree that the letters should have been harder to get. I'm also thinking that the Pride Time levels could have jumping sections to make them a bit less straightforward and more rewarding when you reach the end.
And, yay! Yeah, we wanted to translate the story into Spanish but didn't manage to do so on time. It's definitely coming though, I'm gonna ask Hyn about the translation! Like I commented in "As the light flickers", hopefully we get more games in Spanish in future jams.
I watched a bit of your stream's recording the other day -- thanks for playing and I'm glad you had fun!