First, thank you so much for the game, it's a delight and I loved playing it! There are still a couple errors, though.
If you choose to fight the dragon in Asmad and sacrifice the Gaelans the dialogue triggers mostly correct, but before the summit when Lula reports it to the Matriarch, she still reports that prince Urnammu died.
The graphic for the cursor graphic(?) while selecting a choice is some weird pixel error as is the background that was reported in the screenshot above already.
Also, I think the ending scenes are switched? When I choose Divine War, the dialogue states that the divines aren't necessarily meant to be prayed to anymore, but that's it. When I choose Making a deal with the Divines/Asking for Mercy, there is talk of Eidolons attacking the borders, but no explanation why or what's happening.
Also, in the SFW version... it automatically selects the dialogue choices that decline sex and romance? Like, you choose to kiss them and flirt, but then the dialogue skips to rejected awkwardness and "not now" talk, which sometimes is a pretty severe mood change. And without the sex scenes it's apparently impossible to opt for the poly, bc Virion is automatically friendzoned and only Argandea is a romance choice in the end, even though I've picked literally every flirt choice I could with him (or well, both). In the last game it just left out the graphic scenes, but it was still a pretty clear choice to have sex and it was referenced, but here, it's just.. abstinence and impossible to have sex rather than just fade to black for the scenes in question and that's a little disappointing.
I will still get the NSFW version as soon as I can afford some pocket money again! I hope you can still fix bugs for the game, but for the time being I just want to say: CONGRATULATIONS on finishing it and THANK YOU for all your work and for sharing it for mostly free!