Looks good! I guess that only luck determines if you succeed in life, very deep.
I find glitches in games amusing and I love the extra step you can take after you die.
I had the same problem with the glitchy camera in Unity. I don't know the real fix, but you can change the editor view to fixed 16:9 instead of the default. This will not fix the screen but whatever you see in the editor is what will be seen in the exported version and you can plan accordingly.