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Hey,

I saw that you're working on becoming a game designer, here's all the things that I thought about your game :

-The screen of "how to play" could be a screenshot

-I thought 123 was 123 damages, got what was happening after 2 fights

-That's nice that we have different opponents

-The pokemon inspiration is obvious but nice :D

-Having written "click to roll" on the enemy turn is weird for the player

-It's lacking all the animation of fight

-Too long transition between the turns, I want to click to speed everything up

-The choices are a bit too obvious, you usually know in a seconde what to play

-Nice to have the choice to add more dice in your deck/strategy wise

-I'd like to know all my dices


That's my observations but you obviously can't do EVERYTHING during the jam, and when I play a game made by one developer, I'm not asking to not have anything weird happening, I just wrote everything, because you asked for it :p.

So when I voted I didn't focus on all the small bad things, we all know what it is to dev a game in 48h haha. It's a nice little game that you can be proud of!


Fun thing is, my game has a similar concept as yours (and it has some flaws too obv), I think it may interest you to test it, it's two completely different games, but the battle dice mechanism, and the enemy have the same tools as you.


Anyway, congrats!

Thanks for the feedback, i was aware of a few things. like the long enemy turn, the lack of animation. 
Ye it was hard to tweek in 48hrs. i just wanted the mechanic right as i am not a genious in programming,so i am really proud that ive got a working gameloop.  

Ill check yours out as well! 

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One more time just to be sure ^^, I was THIS exhaustive because you wanted some in depth feedback on the GMTK discord, you can be proud of what you did for sure!

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I know and I really appreciate it. Its way better than "nice game" since I do it for fun, but also to really learn some game design! 

So no "hard feelings" on the tips you gave me. It's really something i will take in advance in future Game Jams!