Here is my review. I'll do the best I can. I am not a judge. So do not worry
Presentation:
I really like the graphics, and the artwork is very nice. The idea is very creative. The menu layout is nice. It would be nice to have more to do besides going to work every day. The music fits well.
Overall in my opinion 18/20
Gameplay:
I'm going to be honest. I don't like the battle system in this game. It's hard to attack when you need to recover. The quest system is good. I like it that you point out where the ore, and stuff is. I highly recommend a different battle system, because I got stuck on Valentia. I couldn't defeat her no matter what I did. So I had no choice but to give up.
Overall in my opinion 13/20
Engagement:
This game was a lot of fun other than getting stuck on Valentia, and having to give up. I would ahve liked to get farther to see more of it. So overall the engagement is the best part.
Overall in my opinion 20/20
Potential:
This a ton of potential I want to see it made into a full game. The world is interesting.
Overall in my opinion 20/20
Final Thoughts, and suggestions:
I honestly disliked the battle system the most. I think that should be changed. Other than that everything else is good. Keep up the good work, and please do not give up.