The atmosphere is good, the dialogues to characters were fun; for game play, I expect to have more "intervention" to the final result, the characters were fun but this system seems like a little bit “separated” to the main game play; if the dialogues to characters vary based on number of times you replay the game, and some character can help player to get better result, or make the result worse, then the dialogues to character can be more integrated to the main gameplay.
Another thing I can't understand, it's "what is the criteria to judge player's death?"; played 4 times, there were 2 times, I had rushed directly to the end, and I got 5 for both times, but 1 time, I died, another time I survived; Is the chance to survive related to the number of dice? or anything else?
Anyway, nice job!