Nice take ! The theme is super cool, the only thing I would change is the piano punches that feel too intense since its like playing chords on lower end with the base drum at the same times its clashing a bit. On the run is a nice idea although after 2 min I wanted something more, go elsewhere but you kept doing the same thing a little variation would be nice. Some tracks I don't know if that was your source of inspiration but I feel like the movie Dune was something you incorporated. Good job !