This wasa lovely game, loved it. Of course it has some issues trying to play the music and the game both at the same time. But you nailed the story.
You could try and fix some grammar mistakes and sentence breaking and what not, because sometimes the chat box was empty, because you spaced everything in a single bubble.
Also you could have used another pallet for some parts of the game, it wasa bit bland to use the sameone all the time.
Still, i loved the story. Congratulations and merry christmas.