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i love everything about this game! except maybe some sex scenes. now i dont think there is anything wrong with the animation, art or the hotness, what i hate is the sudden personality shift of the characters when they enter "sex scene mode". it feels kinda unusual you know? one minute they are talking normally, but suddenly they start fucking eachothers brain out. i'm saying this because i fucking love the writing in this game, so it bothers me that the transions from normal to sex mode is kind of unnatural. please dont take this as hate! i would love for you guys to improve upon your work! xx

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Thank you!

Glad you like it. That is fair, I'll keep it in mind!

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Actually, I did feel similarly.  The writing is solid, with the characters actually having a bit of intellectual competence, and then they sort of degenerate into the typical run of the mill porn-inscribed mono/dialogue.  Nothing wrong with a bit of that, but at times it does feel like the characters’ voices no longer match the personas you built.  Food for thought…but don’t let it bog down the solid work you’ve been producing.

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Thank you. I feel like they can stay in character with who they are without just becoming mindless porn. I don't wanna see that happen with Luna. And see Nancy going that way. Penelope is hinted to be really raunchy and it was scary to get hit with that all at once. Annie kinda stayed on topic with who she was before and during sex. But even in OIAL near the end, it just kinda became about group sex in public. Funny stuff always happened. And I loved the cast, just j love these in Eternum. But I don't want them to act like they have a split personality anytime sex is on the table and big dick is in front of them. That's all I'm saying. And I gotta say, to be fair, if a character just always acts super sexual, so be it. I can accept that. But I don't see that in all of them. Not at all.

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I'm glad someone else said it. It can be jarring when characters who seem to be not that sex focused suddenly seem to just become a horny lust-driven beast. That happens too much in tons of AVNs. And it can ruin characters. Nova seemed to just become a different person when she was tricked into that nonsense with Maat. And I'm not sold totally with Nancy's change after the advice from the Yoga guy. Sometimes it just seems like a switch is flipped and they just become, for lack of a better word, sluts. Im not into it. That's why I fear some of the scenes that may come later.

well i'm trusting caribdis to look into this a bit more, because they are really good at writing!

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The majority of the time the writing is well-done. No lie. Comedy wise, he's unmatched on ITCH. But when it comes to the women dialogue in sex, they act like porn-stars. And I honestly can't see that as who they are. Not even Alex or Nancy. I get it, it's a hentai visual novel. But you can have sex and keep it in character. Or is Caribdis' point with them acting like that, is that that is who they really are? Are they always holding back and pretending to be someone else, but when they jump in bed, they're just thirsty for sex and nothing else? I hope that's not the case. At least not for Luna and Annie. The only person I would buy that would be Calypso, since greek gods are often times said to be into everything including hedonism.