Fisrt,great renders and models for the girls and womens so far.
Now to answer your question,In general, I prefer games where there is a defined story and the dev knows what fetishes his game is going to have haha. (That way I know what to expect from a game, otherwise it may be that in 1 year they add tags that do not interest me )
So I'm going to make it as short as possible, your idea of the game is Harem, romance (Mc "player" can have all the girls and there is no consequence), or do you think the game will contain, sharing, swinging, ntr (netorare, the LI's of mc fuck with other males or female npc) If so, are the fetishes (in general) going to be avoidable (they only happen by player choice), skippable (it happens but the player doesn't see the scene) or forced?
What is the function of dominance points? the delibery guy is important in the story since he has affection points? (to be honest, that didn't give me a good impression haha) Leaving that aside, I would recommend that you make the sandbox system a little more user friendly, maybe at the bottom put an image that is a direct access to each room (not many players like to be clicking rooms in the home without knowing where to go), by the way when the player changes the name and surname of the mc, on the cell phone the family names keep the canon name of the story. (That is, the surname that the player chooses does not appear)
EDIT: I don't know if you are a f95 user but your game was shared on that page, there you can get better feedback. (if you are not a user and you are not used to the forum, do not let some comments affect you, it is normal that some like the game and others do not)
I leave you the link https://f95zone.to/threads/twists-and-turns-v0-1-minaki-studios.126920/