Nice ideas and cool atmosphere. I would not let the player completely skip the text upon clicking once, on my first playthrough I just clicked and skipped most of it, and you can't even know when it's finished. It would be better if clicking just makes all of the text appear instead of having to wait for it, so that you still see it all and can read it, or if that's too much work just don't allow the player to skip.
There seem to be some issues with the Japanese in that screenshot, I believe the correct spelling would be:
で、死んでブラウザのウェブゲームにリスピーンした