This game has a gorgeous consistent art style that really serves the game well, but the gameplay / pacing are VERY slow. Which meant about 75% of the way through, I was just ready to be finished because things just felt a little same-same for me. I think you did excellent getting a lot of content completed within the time frame and things feel very polished. There are a few translation / grammar things, but nothing too distracting. Overall, nice job tackling a heavy topic (thanks for including a warning at the start!)
Overall -- outside of the pacing, I think this game is very high quality and a fantastic addition to IGMC. :)
(edited to fix some bad syntax on my part!)