Definitely a very poetic work of prose. This work was not in my preferred style of writing or storytelling, fyi, so take my comments for whatever you wish them to be worth.
I felt very uncertain, as I did not know who the speaker was, or why she was observing the (meteorite impact?) She dwells upon her cowardice, but I don't know why she thinks she's a coward, or why she might need or wish to be brave.
The narration is very detached and impersonal, even before the speaker is injured. This put a distance between her and me, and makes her seem very detached from herself - especially when she's berating herself for cowardice.
The use of 'the eye' as the final narrator is even more impersonal and alien. It served, I think, to highlight for me how the speaker has at that point passed or is passing beyond being human, in a meaningful sense, but the final paragraphs make it seem as though her death is a form of enlightenment.
On a more prosaic note, it wasn't clear what the 'unconventional weapon' even was, let alone how it figured in the narrative. Was the impact that destroys the horrible building an intentional act? If that was the intent, considering this was written for a themed jam, it might have been worthwhile sacrificing some of the poetic flow of the piece in the name of making that fact more prominent.