Thank you for the feedback, I really appreciate it. Yes this was definitely inspired by LiL and it more or less feels like a knock-off at the very start but I do have plans to divert it from being looked at that way. I don't want my game to be a copy of a great game and besmirch said game as I highly respect it and it's creator. If it is that much of an issue, I'll scrap it and start from scratch but I feel like this could be something great that will not be like LiL. The very start of it will be like LiL, that i won't deny, however the story will be very different. As for the characters, this is something I've noticed in my most recent writings of dialogues and they do feel bland (however, MC is made purposely to be bland for future branches) and I will work on it in the future. Do keep me updated with how you feel about the game in general as it will help me progress the development of the game.