Yeah, those are fair points, I will say you have quite a bit of room on the right side of the player and gm spreads and you can grab some free photography from Unsplash or other free image sources. But yeah I think the thing that would elevate this the most is a clarity pass and some text formatting to make the mechanics stick out in the text. Again, I think it’s a cool idea and has some novel mechanics and a very interesting premise. Best of luck, and good work.