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Very cool concept and is something more interesting and different from other jam gams! Character srpites are very good, although the UI I think clashed with the syle. My only nitpick is just the writing being a little weak and having mostly bad grmmar made it hard to follow some times. Otherwise very good job, the technical implementation is a lot of work to undertake in only 10 days.

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Thanks for your feedback!

You hit a nerve,  especially grammar is something I have to work on badly.

When I start developing my game I didn't know how much work was needed honestly. Also I had only seven days 'cause I was busy on the weekend. I totally understimate it XD This is something I will take on account next time, I will reduce the scope to have more time to polish later.

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Well if you keep practicing you'll get there. Luckily there are no ratings for grammar etc.
Still, full marks for technical implementation I gave. Doing a system like that in 7 days would absolutely do my head in, the one I made was already hard enough and that was more simple.

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Your game is awsome as it is! In the end if mechanics are good doesn't matter how hard they are to make. I gave you 5 stars for implementation too ;)

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Do you know the website deepl.com? It's a pretty good translator. It might help fixing the grammar next time. I use it all the time to be sure :)