Hello! It's me again, I'm sorry for making ruckus earlier www
SPOILER: I love the idea of this game, it feels almost real. I could see the transparent spirit from time to time and that makes me felt uneasy. And the error message and the forced choices makes it even more creepy.
The only thing that really bother me is the very small quick menus on the corner. I almost missed it and only noticed it when the screen was completely black. I would rather use Ren'Py's default quick menu configuration, or if you really want to make it feels like "no escape game", you can just delete the quick menu and disable right-click and escape button.