Playing this right after Dawn of the Damned really showcased to me how much better your writing is than the material being adapted here! I mean, I will not deny the voice acting, art, and use of environmental audio cues is excellent - considering that all this was done in less than a month. But I feel even the writing exclusive to the VN outshines the rest of the adapted material. I guess that's just me watching a lot of Twilight Zone and other such anthology series.
But yeah! All things considered, you did great adapting what was given. I honestly wish that the adapted material was used as inspiration for an original story - now that would've been amazing.