Pff, I'll copy edit for you if you like. It's a short game, it'd take like 10 minutes.
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Really?! Your kindness overwhelms me and leaves me without words, thank you so much for the proposal.
I did a little revision, maybe there are still typos (and some clunky English) that I didn’t notice but, even if It’s silly (especially considering how team focus programing-adjacent projects are) when I began to work in this little game I wanted to see how far I could go alone and I think that I want to preserve that.
Not silly at all, it's your choice of course and that's perfectly valid! And check out my entry if you have a chance: https://itch.io/jam/spooktober-vn-jam-2022/rate/1690696