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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Scariness... | #28 | 4.071 | 4.071 |
| Monsterous! | #60 | 3.857 | 3.857 |
| Fun | #63 | 4.071 | 4.071 |
| Overall | #67 | 3.700 | 3.700 |
| Halloweeny? | #90 | 3.643 | 3.643 |
| Candy!! | #102 | 2.857 | 2.857 |
Ranked from 14 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Log Line
Ending up in the bottom of the well someone searchs for a way out...
Content Warnings
Weird noises
Implied blood and Death
Nothing too explicit
Team Members
Taumi Licorice
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Amazing art, transitions and suspense! Played many times to see how many endings I could find, it does change when you already got one and then try for another, or something like that? I thought that was a great detail! And the plot idea was great. En fin, me encanto!
¡Gracias!
I'm really happy to hear that you liked it and played it more than one time, yes some things change a little if you play again.
The visuals and design of this game feel very purposefully used--layout, colors, typography, and the little flourishes all serve to underline the story you're telling. It has a good mysterious and creepy feel, and doesn't reveal too much. You should send it through a copy editor to catch those typos, though.
Hi! Thanks for the feedback!! Always glad to hear that the ambience managed to be creepy and mysterious, I tried to make the experience like a claustrophobic fever dream, kind of luminal with just enough of a story to make the reader wonder what is happening and why, just like the protagonist.
English isn’t my first language and it’s my first game, now that i think of it; first time writing directly in english to, lots of first times, so I know there are things that need more polish, like the typos.
I really appreciate the suggestion but i feel kind of bad about making someone work for free even if it’s a small game.
Pff, I'll copy edit for you if you like. It's a short game, it'd take like 10 minutes.
Really?! Your kindness overwhelms me and leaves me without words, thank you so much for the proposal.
I did a little revision, maybe there are still typos (and some clunky English) that I didn’t notice but, even if It’s silly (especially considering how team focus programing-adjacent projects are) when I began to work in this little game I wanted to see how far I could go alone and I think that I want to preserve that.
Not silly at all, it's your choice of course and that's perfectly valid! And check out my entry if you have a chance: https://itch.io/jam/spooktober-vn-jam-2022/rate/1690696
A really nice work! I'm particularly impressed by your use of color - it sets the mood really well, and creates some really great interactions between the background art, story, and motion effects. Well done!
Thank you so much!!
A great spooky experience!
Absolutely loved the use of typography in this game . The use of different fonts, different sizes and all. Also the animations, an absolute trip!
I fear I don't have much feedback to offer because it is already has awesome writing and a perfect presentation. Really hope to see longer form VNs from you.
Thank you for making this game!
Thank you for leaving a coment, it made me very happy!