Hi! Thanks for the feedback!! Always glad to hear that the ambience managed to be creepy and mysterious, I tried to make the experience like a claustrophobic fever dream, kind of luminal with just enough of a story to make the reader wonder what is happening and why, just like the protagonist.
English isn’t my first language and it’s my first game, now that i think of it; first time writing directly in english to, lots of first times, so I know there are things that need more polish, like the typos.
I really appreciate the suggestion but i feel kind of bad about making someone work for free even if it’s a small game.