Nice! From the start, I knew I would like this song: it had a form of melody and chord-progression which signals to me you know what you're doing - even if just a little. The addition of the new instrument at 0:21 was nice, loved that. Plenty of variation, and every part stood on its own yet felt part of a whole. The ending was a bit sudden but then I knew why - you can loop it!
So far this is one of my favorites. It might lack a bit of POWER, but you've got something seriously nice going on her, good job!
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But you know what - even though it might lack some POWER, it is a sick song though! I accidentally left it on repeat for apparently ~20 loops, and I forgot it was even on! That specifies to me that the song does not have any 'weird gimmicks' that sound weird and distract me - it is a song that stays good even when hearing it 20 times! It might not need the power at all, it is good as is. I love it <3