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For "this is my first time ever making a music", this wasn't bad at all! At first I figured, what a weird song, but when I remembered that you had text to accompany this, I stopped the music and went back to read. The music alone is a bit weird perhaps, but with the text it works quite well. I hear the "steps" you intended to make, and somehow the music matched perfectly with the text (1. "You don't hear the clomps anymore" timed for me with the pause at 0:41; 2. The ending matched with the end-sound at 0:50).
Furthermore, I liked the change at 0:29 (it also needed that - otherwise it becomes too much of the same) and mostly, I LOVED the part starting at 0:51! It reminds me of... some intro for a mid-boss from Zelda or something xD.
Overal, purely on sound it is not my favorite entry of the series, but I love the originality of trying to make a song match the text (like a movie-composer tries to match the scene). And for a first time making music, I can see that you tried out some stuff and you made it work well. Honestly, it is a good entry! You can be proud of yourself :)