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I'm glad to hear others had difficulty with the birds - I assumed I was just rubbish at platformers!  I really enjoyed working out the maths puzzles in the middle though!

Beautiful art, and beautiful prose!

The truth behind the mystery was really clever, although there was definitely a bit of 'deus ex machina' in the protagonist's solution.

My only other thought was that it felt unintuitive to me that the 'crouch' key was on the row above the 'jump' key on the keyboard - since jump feels like 'up' and crouch feels like 'down' I would have expected crouch to be on the row below jump.

But overall this was a really fun ghost story experience!

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Thank you so much for your kind words and feedback -- I appreciate it!  Yes, you're right about the storyline -- I'm always conscious that many players can get fatigued on long story cutscenes, so I tried to make something that could wrap up in good time, but it is abrupt.  On the keying, it sounds like you are a WASD player; for those players, I intended J to be used for jump and K for gliding.  (For arrow players, C for jump and X for glide).  I'm impressed if you beat this game on WASD/CX keying, I'm sorry if it felt crammed/weird!  Thank you again for playing and providing comments!